Re: Grammar and Spelling Hunters, Unite!
It could imply that their ancestors are still alive and building ships.
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It could imply that their ancestors are still alive and building ships.
very old people
Success! Our magicans casted a spell on the enemy resource center and managed to destroy 4% iron.
Cast is the correct present and past tense forms
> Valcona wrote:
> Success! Our magicans casted a spell on the enemy resource center and managed to destroy 4% iron.
Cast is the correct present and past tense forms
---not to mention Magi-can!
lol i mentioned that one ageeeeees ago ![]()
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you spell it committed ?
The start date has been set back to 4/2/13. Please read announcments for other details of things to come.
announcements
Rather the game didn't use American format for dates - 4th February was ages ago...
The ISO standard is yyyymmdd
The international passport standard is dd mmm yy
Is it so hard to write a date neatly?
s'pose its not really a grammar error. but when upcoming tick warning Appears and u go to fam news page it moves the heading ![]()
Alundra Today 00:00:17
17 seconds off this time!
In the family news is read:
Week X,X FamA sabotaged the Player portal on planet XX,XX:XX.
would read better as:
Week X,X FamA sabotaged Player's portal on planet XX,XX:XX.
On behalf of Lightguns, so any possible tagpoints or so should go to him:
Currently in relations:
"Your family currently have no diplomatic ties to any other family."Should be ...has no... as it refers to one family.
^Isn't that some weird European thing where they refer to things like this (teams, families, etc.) as plural?
Many of our scienctists suddenly died by heart attacks today our wizards report that this was caused by magic from Drones, we lost 3% of our total collected research.
scienctists -> scientists
by -> of
maybe also add a comma or fullstop between 'today' and 'our'
Either:
Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks today. Our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones, causing us to lose 3% of our total collected research.
Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks. Today, our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones. We lost 3% of our total collected research.
Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks today, our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones. We lost 3% of our total collected research
Week 40, Year 2833 Buildings complete We have built 30 Mining facility on xx,yy:zz
to
Week 40, Year 2833 Buildings complete We have built 30 Mining facilities on xx,yy:zz
Should be a simple fix (apologies for the upcoming pseudocode):
builtminingfacility(x)
if (builtminingfacility=1){
print("We have built 1 Mining facility on"+coordinate)
}
else {
print("We have built "+x+" Mining facilities on"+coordinate)
}
the exact implementation would be up to yourself, ofcourse
The powerful Tokaasi Empire of the distant Veddek Galaxy is luring agents from all over the galaxy with promises of fortunes and fame. We are steadily losing agents.
fortunes -> fortune
could also be rephrased:
The powerful Tokaasi Empire of the distant Veddek Galaxy is luring agents from all over the galaxy, promising fortune and fame. We are steadily losing agents.
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