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It could imply that their ancestors are still alive and building ships.

DH (ave/\/\an

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very old people

"I was beginning to think you were afraid to fight."
"I'm just naturally lazy, but I will if I have to."

Retired

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Success! Our magicans casted a spell on the enemy resource center and managed to destroy 4% iron.


Cast is the correct present and past tense forms

Valour-the courage to do what scares you to death

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> Valcona wrote:

> Success! Our magicans casted a spell on the enemy resource center and managed to destroy 4% iron.


Cast is the correct present and past tense forms





---not to mention Magi-can!

Worrrrrrrrrrrrrrd

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lol i mentioned that one ageeeeees ago tongue

Been dreaming, I've been waiting, To fly with those brave ponies
The Wonderbolts, their daring tricks, Spinning 'round and having kicks
Perform for crowds of thousands, They'll shower us with diamonds
The Wonderbolts will see me right here at the Gala!

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you spell it committed ?

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The start date has been set back to 4/2/13. Please read announcments for other details of things to come.




announcements

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Rather the game didn't use American format for dates - 4th February was ages ago...
The ISO standard is yyyymmdd
The international passport standard is dd mmm yy

Is it so hard to write a date neatly?

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s'pose its not really a grammar error. but when upcoming tick warning Appears and u go to fam news page it moves the heading smile

Been dreaming, I've been waiting, To fly with those brave ponies
The Wonderbolts, their daring tricks, Spinning 'round and having kicks
Perform for crowds of thousands, They'll shower us with diamonds
The Wonderbolts will see me right here at the Gala!

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Alundra Today 00:00:17

17 seconds off this time!

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This

Insanity and genius are closely related!
*** Eltie for mod! ***
Failing Lemming of Teachings and Australian Cop Orgies: Gwynedd

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In the family news is read:
Week X,X  FamA sabotaged the Player portal on planet XX,XX:XX.

would read better as:
Week X,X FamA  sabotaged Player's portal on planet XX,XX:XX.

Valour-the courage to do what scares you to death

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On behalf of Lightguns, so any possible tagpoints or so should go to him:

LiGhTGuNs wrote:

Currently in relations:
"Your family currently have no diplomatic ties to any other family."

Should be ...has no... as it refers to one family.

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^Isn't that some weird European thing where they refer to things like this (teams, families, etc.) as plural?

But man is not made for defeat. A man can be destroyed but not defeated

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Many of our scienctists suddenly died by heart attacks today our wizards report that this was caused by magic from Drones, we lost 3% of our total collected research.

scienctists -> scientists

by -> of

maybe also add a comma or fullstop between 'today' and 'our'


Either:

Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks today. Our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones, causing us to lose 3% of our total collected research.

Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks. Today, our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones. We lost 3% of our total collected research.

Many of our scientists suddenly died of heart attacks today, our wizards report this was caused by magic from Drones. We lost 3% of our total collected research

May your aim be true and don't forget to duck big_smile

141 (edited by Scouty 02-Mar-2017 12:35:07)

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Week 40, Year 2833    Buildings complete    We have built 30 Mining facility on xx,yy:zz

to

Week 40, Year 2833    Buildings complete    We have built 30 Mining facilities on xx,yy:zz

Should be a simple fix (apologies for the upcoming pseudocode):

builtminingfacility(x)

if (builtminingfacility=1){
    print("We have built 1 Mining facility on"+coordinate)
}
else {
    print("We have built "+x+" Mining facilities on"+coordinate)
}

the exact implementation would be up to yourself, ofcourse

May your aim be true and don't forget to duck big_smile

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The powerful Tokaasi Empire of the distant Veddek Galaxy is luring agents from all over the galaxy with promises of fortunes and fame. We are steadily losing agents.

fortunes -> fortune

could also be rephrased:

The powerful Tokaasi Empire of the distant Veddek Galaxy is luring agents from all over the galaxy, promising fortune and fame. We are steadily losing agents.

May your aim be true and don't forget to duck big_smile