SHEEP w00t

I expected gruesome details:p

I did with my assignments:p. We had to change a fairy tale into another story it had to have the same morales tho. I picked red rover and made it into a warhammer story:p. My teacher called me to his side to 'talk' about what I wrote. It was pretty amousing. Did the same with international poem day. Shame I did neither assignment on my PC so they are lost now.

The Xenos are comming
Hords and legions of enemy
waiting for slaughter
slaughter by our ships
by our weapons

they come and their blood spilll
in the millions it spills
our lines falter for a second

it went on and on like that although i had AA BB fixed somehow in there. I cant remember the words I used.

Honestly, is that all you have to say? Writing of any caliber is a significant investment of time; if you don't like it, you could at least justify it with some _constructive_ criticism - or if that concept is beyond the understanding of your mortal mind, you could choose not to speak at all. Your comment is an insult to the effort that went into the writing at hand and is not worth the database space it takes up.

In the Roleplay forum, if we find something at fault in a fellow writer's work, we offer suggestions as to how it can be fixed. Even if a writer is completely incompetent, we point them in the right direction and use _positive_ reinforcement as they improve. Negative reinforcement without justification, as you have seen fit to provide, is not only frowned upon, it is not tolerated.