At least three-fifths of us are native English speakers. That leaves Fokker. Judging by the caliber of his writing, I'm sure he understands the concept of exposition, or has the means to discover it.

Thus.

For the record, how old is Amanda? Her age plays an important part in the next post I'm writing.

Yes, I have a problem, at least with the execution.

Firstly, General Michael Camore is still Carl's superior in the Blacken command structure, so Carl would not show that amount of disrespect to him. If Carl had concerns, he would voice them privately, not to Camore's face.

Second, if General Camore were really that xenophobic, he would have done something about it long before - perhaps a few months after the assassination attempt. He is a powerful man, let's leave it that that.

Third, if we need a xenophobe, then we can call on Admiral Peter Morna - a character from First Story, a Kallum sympathizer who infiltrated Blacken's command structure. You can read more about him from our most complete primary source <http://atomicinf.homelinux.org/~atomicinf/space%20teh%20story.html>.

Thats quite some text man:p. I feel discouraged when i look at it.

And these few posts makes me feel like a school boy getting his first xbox360

really wtf

anyways. I won't really post about the conversation with the other admirals and such because I could give away just too much.

p.s.: I think the Wardancers where a cheap knockoff from my race:p and their entire air of doing things. And I wasn't too fond of my race becomming the lower race. But thats just my usual self talking. RP me is totaly fine with it.

Wolves, is this briefing big enough that the other Alliance members will want to send delegates? Or is this just a Blacken thing?

I had this like massive post ready, with Jeodan describing the insides of the beast and whatnot, but then i pressen back, accidentaly

And just as FYI, I'm gunna start copying and saving all the posts of the story (and OOC if you guys want) so we're not completely screwed if this happens AGAIN

Welcome true believer. I think you may write yourself in as aspiring member of the alliance. As many other races have already done. Wardancers recieved a head up on other people because of unknown reasons, maybe mind manipulation:p.

Or if you only want to reashearch i think the alliance will not want to have

One of the aspects of the Overseer fleets was that size really didn't make much of a difference to conventional fleets, but only to that of the dark. Thus the Dark were so powerful of an enemy to anything that lived, that the overseers would never meddle in the affairs of races, unless it was to unite them against the dark. And frankly the goings on in the universe would be of secondary interest to Nai. So there were always checks and balances to the overseer race.

For instance, the Worldships the mods used were planet sized.. but not offensive.. Infact.. quite the opposite, and the source of all their power. The worldship Sogil was destroyed, not once, but twice in fact. The primary defenses the overseers would ever fall back on was templar technology.

I have. At least what is here since the forum's were reinstated. It's very engaging.

Welcome Nai, I (Salamandastron) have read the Player Rebellion story, it was very good. One question: Was Talos a spelling mistake for Talus or is it just the name of an area?