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I agree with Arocalex. This is a different story then Player Rebellion with different players. Merging the two anymore then now would just be silly IMO.

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Also, I have no objection to the 'Borg'.

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403 (edited by [RPA] Arocalex 13-Oct-2008 12:11:42)

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Nai, you need to 'port' your race to this story. And not just have a carbon copy

And bloodmoon forgot a part

"Do not resist, all your biological and technological capabilities will be assimilated. Resistance is futile"

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If your going to bring the borg and their race in from star trek, then it should be expected that I be true to the Scions as they were written in the Players Rebellion, right?

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Then don't bring in the whole lot. That would just be bullshit.

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I agree with Wolves. That is why I only have a limited number of Dreamweavers, a race of my own creation and imagination.

The Borg had 10 of thousands of planets and billions and billions of people. They would be far greater threat than the Kryroch. Not to mention we know from star trek, their collective was destoryed. The borg as star trek ended it, were completely destroyed by the fluidic space race, and their last feeble attempt was thwarted by Data (in one of those really bad movies they made).

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I mentioned in my post that this cube is cut off from the main Collective. As of right now, it is really the only presence of its kind in this universe. I'm not calling on the entire Collective (that would, IMHO, overshadow everything else in the plot), so there's no reason to call on the rest of the Scion.

Species 8472 did not destroy the Borg. Voyager gave the Borg the necessary data to successfully assimilate members of Species 8472. The most significant blow to the Borg Collective, in the Star Trek universe, was dealt by Kathryn Janeway working with her future self, and it is not established that the destruction thusly wrought extended across the entire Collective.

We've lived with twelve Dreamweavers, so it should not be a stretch at all to live with one cube. Am I right?

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> Nai wrote:

> And if you read the origonal Players Rebellion the Scion wipe out such entities due to a "past universe" the Scion did not intervien and watched an entire universe fall to such creatures..

The wrath the Scion hold for such as this borg or borg like race you want to introduce would draw entire many multi-universal fleets to erridicate. Please read the Player Rebellion for the details. There are many hundreds of billions of Dreamweavers and similar races that serve the Scion and in turn the Ad'mini. If we sent such a fleet, the stars in your galaxy would shade the light from their presence. So...

Up to you...Our heavy weapons can remove galaxies from existance (ie, or EOR weapon) what's one ship like that gonna pose a challenge to that.



Nai... Let me ask YOU to read something. Its called the rules of this forum. They are quite simple when it comes to godmodding. I was fine with the idea of your seemingly invincible fleets, but bringing billions of them... Thats where I draw the line.


P.S. This isn't the Player Rebellion, either. At the same time, it's not star trek, but there is a VERY large difference between one cube and 'hundreds of billions' of Scion.

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Salamandastron, My issue isnt the borg.. it's that the borg are here..

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410 (edited by Nai 14-Oct-2008 08:00:59)

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Quoting the tail end of matthais: " and it is not established that the destruction thusly wrought extended across the entire Collective."

The Borg/Data event is was final. There was no doubt. They were completely destroyed to the last one, hense the star [trek] monkeying-with-the-time-travel-thing again.

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Just deal with it, you have more issues to deal with.

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Salamandastron, My issue isnt the borg.. it's that the borg are here.. They do NOT belong here. For goodness sakes we've had a great story with alot of OUR origonal ideas... why corrupt it with someone elses sci-fi race now. In my opinion, a story like this one we've worked on for so long looses it's respect and credibility when something like the borg, which is main stream sci-fi, is added to the story like. Readers will see it as, this guy has no vision, and it tarnishes everything. it will be chalked up to something like a star trek vs star wars thread.. this is much greater than that.


And btw, about this "godmodding" you keep throwing up, the Dreamweavers are not immortal, I've made that clear. And there are 15, not 12 dreamweavers. You'll also note all the interaction that has occured has not been with Nai and your races, he has not been involved other than watching and planning and a story highlight to the arc.

May I offer something else to use, vice the borg. Please read the Player Rebellion thread about the Theronic Universe. Its all there. And if you read through it, there is even a way to destory an immortal Scion. If you want an intelligent sentient robot race.. there is one from the Theronic Universe you could use, which I might add, I brought up over a year before they were introduced into Stargate. In fact some of the story devices in the Player Rebellion consistantly popped up in star gate epicsodes.

Here are some just some examples. The Dreamweavers = The Nox, Theronic Universe = Replicators, the Acensended = the Scion/Mods. (just a few playing attention, the rest just ignoring the milky way galaxy) etc.. anyhow, there are too many to continue to be specific.

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Well, I'm gunna go with Algebra with the Borg. There is nothing wrong with adding them even if they are from something else.

Almost all of the ideas have been from other ideas. Almost all of those ARE actually other ideas from other games and stories. The Star-Gods from WH40K, Algebra's whole backstory is from a game and just ask what the races and ideas the others have gotten them from.

................"Nai... Let me ask YOU to read something. Its called the rules of this forum. They are quite simple when it comes to godmodding. I was fine with the idea of your seemingly invincible fleets, but bringing billions of them... Thats where I draw the line.


P.S. This isn't the Player Rebellion, either. At the same time, it's not star trek, but there is a VERY large difference between one cube and 'hundreds of billions' of Scion.".............

I agree with Sala. But I actually drew the line right at the seemingly invincible.

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414 (edited by [RPA] Matthias Bloodmoon 14-Oct-2008 16:46:23)

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What Borg/Data thing? If you're talking about the events of ST:FC, then ST:VOY has already established that the Borg Queen is not a unique entity.

Additionally, ST:FC takes place in 2373. The events of ST:VOY extend to 2378. Even in "Endgame", nothing establishes the complete destruction of the Borg.

Which is completely beside the point anyway, because this cube could have come from essentially anywhere.

Moving on to another topic... we've all taken source material from every place imaginable and _ported_ it to this roleplay, adapting it as necessary. The races/species/civilizations themselves are not the original content - it's their _evolution_ within this timeline that gives the roleplay its spirit of originality. Dropping PR verbatim into this roleplay may not be the best idea - the better approach, IMO, is to adapt the source material you need while staying within the limitations of the story, which is what I eventually intend to do with the cube ship.

Evidenced by the opinions of my fellow writers, the Scion as they exist right now are seriously unbalanced and need some revision, whereas no problems exist with the introduction of cubical objects, regardless of origin.

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Again, there are 15 Dreamweaver, and a Scion. We've converted colony planets and outposts (totalling roughly 270ish) which about half have the defense ring, and from those planets they have built 9 scion cruisers, which are purely defensive. The Scion (Nai) is on a world, far removed and influences it with one of this dreamweavers, who basically fight a clandestine war against the bugs, which basically feed of your races. The only attacks were on acid rain facilities and equipped warships where you guys were basically killing each other with. The only major effect the Scion have taken on your races is the dampening of communications, which only 1 on you really embraced into their stories. The rest of you just wrote your way around it, so I modified the Scion plan to compensate for that. I rewrote the Earth bit, which, having read up more on it was due to a misunderstanding.

You wipe out planets in minutes, we can't even completely protect your fleets from bugs, such as in the story where your first introduced to the Scion World Rings. So, omg, I'm sorry, where is the God Modding?

And now you ok the Borg? Fine. But if that's what you want, one ship won't constitue the Scion fleets in the manner I explained.. but a major universe full of em would. So there is your the balance.

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You wipe out planets in minutes, we can't even completely protect your fleets from bugs, such as in the story where your first introduced to the Scion World Rings. So, omg, I'm sorry, where is the God Modding?

A) We have never 'destroyed' a planet, we have only conquered colonies (which aren't ususally more then a few thousand unless they've been there for a while) and (In my case) most of them are military outposts, the only inhabitants are the soldiers who are fighting to control them.
B) I'm sorry... but seeing as how we've survived on our own for quite a while... Why is it now that we need you to 'protect' our fleets?
C) You can't see the god modding? Well here's a list to help you:

1. Seemingly Invincible Fleets (against which we were told to not even hint we have a chance against)
2. Knocking out ALL methods of communication, and once we developed a way around it claimed to have "Opened" that form.
3. Introduced yet another race, which 'feeds' off of us, and apparently one we can't deal with on our own.


"The average Scion fleet if you want to put any engagements will be a dreamweaver as a flag ship, and 5 to 7 Icharys type pickett vessels. If/When you do have your first engagemetns vs these squadrons, not even for an instant show that you guys have a chance. I will be giving you opportunities for that, ie a break, here or there."

^
Just a bit of evidence for my previous claims, taken from this OOC thread - page 13. We have yet to see a 'break' from your ships. I never went at length to describe the fight between yours and mine, because they held Acid Rain missiles, so I doubted you'd give them any 'breaks'.

ALSO: "The only attacks were on acid rain facilities and equipped warships where you guys were basically killing each other with."

That would be every single Talus Munitions Factory, as well as the entire standing Fleet, because that was the Talus primary space weapon, though most ship-to-ship batches were downgraded simply because there isn't the same number of people in a ship as there are in a city.



So there, Nai, there's your god modding.

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To retort your comment:

1. Invincible? Read the PR thread. There are even ways to kill Scion. I've given you guys hints and all sort of things to "get a clue". The pilars on the Scion gift world for one have alots of information. None of you went to investigate it. I tried to give you the chances. None of you have tried to make contact with the "darkones/bugs" just assumed they were mindless or something.. I've tried to show you there is an intelligence behind it an a, for a lack of a better choice of language, a "fallen-scion" involved. So hints, for goodness sakes, I've been dropping lots of hints.

2. The communication blockage was to add to the story, it was dropped due to you guys making write arounds. All it took was a mere 2 posts before it was ignored so I could create more to the story..

3. (see 1 for more clues)

4. I have 15 dream weavers, and 1 Scion. You have empires, fleets and massive resources.


Guys don't you see the potential? Dont you want the Scion and the story arc I have brought you, the challenge they pose, the potential of something unknown, with references and source materials from the PR thread. Come on now, this is role play. I am taken extensive pains to not be God mode. Your rolling over and playing possum.. no one has stood up to challenge us. Perhaps you just want your massive story arcs to go fight this or that, and oyu saving the day.. where are the hero's and heroines in that?

I am challenging you to raise the bar. Not cuz I'm wanting to gloat. We've got lots of time to write this story.. Yeah, you ran into a super race. So.. what are you gonna go.. whine about it? fight it? Befriend it? But you gotta understand..

Bottom line, I have not god moded crap. All I have done is pose to you something youre gonna have to be creative. I didn't expect the borg to be your creative juice. I just expected more.

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4. I have 15 dream weavers, and 1 Scion. You have empires, fleets and massive resources.

^ Then how did you do a galaxy-wide communications block (which i added in my stuff and my guys are still using short-wave stuff) with only that? And that is true, we're more built-up here then the Scion are. But you said it yourself, you have a "super race".

Any way.. Now that my Imperial story arc is done, I'll be paying more attention to you. If you're looking for someone to raise the bar, I'm here. And, I also hinted that Garrus planned to look more closely into the Scion situation. In fact, he's already been to one Scion world, so he might be back, after he closes up loose ends on Blacken.

Thus, I'll step back from this arguement for now, and get back to the Story tongue

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"No bastard ever won a war by dying for his country. He won it by making the other poor dumb bastard die for his country."

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Good. Should be fun! smile


As and far as teh galaxy wide communications blockage, you would have found out, but with the write arounds, I never got to tell you. Maybe one of you could write about a science team working to understand it... I tried to you guys guys a kick off to just such a thing with the tribunal.. I has to do with wave forms and quantum theory, and I'll point out the clue to get you started, archaic sound technology for non-energy based works, where other forms did not.

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420 (edited by [RPA] Arocalex 15-Oct-2008 09:06:38)

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Our chars are too busy saving the world tongue.

Maybe i'll introduce a sientist or so in my next post

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You are creating blocks of your story that are too big to properly write with.

We have massive empires because for one, Two of our number have been here from the beggining. We created our empires through three different stories. Everyone else started from midway through number two. There is plenty of backstory as to why we have empires and fleets and big guns that can do alot. We spent years writing this stuff. We spent years creating this galaxy.

YOU Nai, joined near the beggining of THIS story, the THIRD story. You joined with your 15 creatures and your main character. You joined and instantly tried to connect EVERYTHING to the Scion.

Our stories have crossed paths but never have we had to ask the others to "Just bear with it, I'll explain when your all under my control."

I'm sick of it, and I was from the beggining. Use your own characters to interact and tell your stories through your own means, without trying to take even a small amount of control over other characters or you can stop participating.


No more fleets that can't be beaten. And no more 'hints' at ways we can. If you want something that seems like that, you make sure we know of those ways BEFORE you bring it in. If we agree then it will work, and you will have the story to tell.


In short, ask first instead of doing.

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422 (edited by [RPA] Arocalex 15-Oct-2008 13:59:58)

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Actually i agree with wolves.

A lot of us, including me have put a lot of time and effort and have some basic understanding on how to proceed with out charactars and such. It all good when someone makes you the destroyer of all civilizations. And such but once you try to lead the roleplay as if you own it you go too far

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Fenris, get off your high horse.

No more fleets that can't be beaten. (Your natives, and the spanish came along. /scarsatic OMG, GAME OVER end the story now. Maybe you should go talk to the French or English?)

And no more 'hints' at ways we can. (My hints have been about as subtle as a shover over the forehead.)

If you want something that seems like that, you make sure we know of those ways BEFORE you bring it in. (Note the tribunal, the pilars, the PR thread... yes, such subtle hints.)

If we agree then it will work, and you will have the story to tell. (Well I dont agree with the Borg into the story and you've basically told me to stick it.. So, I've conceeded on that cuz sala has asked me to.)


So Fenris..

1. Yout want my fleets to be capable of being destroyed.. go talk to the dark ones/bugs.. after 14 billion years of war, you think they might know how? And since you want to discuss it so we all are happily agreed, lets make sure in this forum we all agree it appropriate. In short, ask first instead of doing, right?.

2. This is the pivotal dichotomy of what is at heart here. Your statement "In short, ask first instead of doing" the follow what I preach, not what I do. I get the impression that your just telling me to stuff it. And if that's the case, I'll just hold you to the same litmus you want to hold me to. (Must I remind you I made a massive re-write of a post I made so you could have Logan have a messianic sort of death.)


Arcalex..

To quote you "And such but once you try to lead the roleplay as if you own it you go too far"... that is exactly what I was referring to in #2 to fenris. In addition, I am not some "out to get you guys" race. The interactions I've had with you guys involve very real world senarios: religion (Children of the Creators), just wars (destruction of the acid Rain), ivory towers (Nia's interacting through dream weavers/others) and lastly an axis of evil (the Darkones) etc...

And it's intereacting. Jeordan was left floating in space.. and the thought in the OOC thread was "do what you want, I'm not sure what to do with him." Now his story is progressing.

The acid rain was presented in a similar manner as a Dr. Strangelove sort of question to the use of nuclear weapons (which I thought was brilliant on your part). So the juxtaposition of that choice with someone's conscience, ie Nai's choice to have the dreamweavers attack those using it, was sort of manifestation of a "real" consequence to a moral choice.

ps. Yes.. this is the level of thought I put into my posts... So when I say I have taken great pains not to be "God moding".. You can see from above, I am true to my word. Again, if I am guilty of any but of god mode-ing here, it's that I offered you guys a challenge. Where is the probelm in that?

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424 (edited by [RPA] Arocalex 15-Oct-2008 20:03:53)

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I like being called brilliant tongue

Anyways the way you had portrayed the dark ones as dark slithering blobs or something kinda make me think they werent intelligent, just animal like. But that could be my problem.

EDIT: Got mah next post ready waiting on you guys

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Go for it.. I wont have anything til tomorrow.. also waiting for sala to post what he wants to do next.

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