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Topic: The Assassins Prayer

If I should fail, may the Lady find my soul worthy for all those that I have helped on their way to her. If I succeed then may the Lady embrace the soul I give to her.

The assassin

War is young men dieing and old men talking

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I liked this alot, it flows smoothly and is very interesting. The prologue is a little confusing, but after a second read-through I understood its point.

AS i said before, I like it. Got any more? smile

George Smith Patton
"No bastard ever won a war by dying for his country. He won it by making the other poor dumb bastard die for his country."

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Yeah but I'm going to post it slowly as I still need to continue writing it.

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