1 Topic by - [ Deadly X ] - (edited by - [ Deadly X ] - 05-Nov-2016 00:12:05)

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Topic: [VERIFY] Textline of sabotaged portal in famnews.

Says " Week XX, X        (enemy empire name) sabotaged the (victim) portal on planet XX,X:X. "

This is just strangely phrased and should be adjusted to a proper report


Sounds better imo if it sounds as ".. sabotaged the portal of (victim) on planet XX,X:X "

" At the sight of the massive flames, Xerxes nodded approvingly. "Had it not been for the unbearable stench, we'd been having flame-grilled beast for dinner tonight." ~ RisingDown

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Re: [VERIFY] Textline of sabotaged portal in famnews.

agreed.  changed it to "sabotaged (victim)'s portal on..."

please confirm.  thanks

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Re: [VERIFY] Textline of sabotaged portal in famnews.

y sabotaged s portal on planet



Fixed *****

[13:43] <@RisingDown> never thought i'd say it, but TBO actually did something useful.
[13:43] <@arsy> dont let him see you say that
[13:43] <@RisingDown> oh shit
[13:43] * You were kicked from #room by arsy (kapow!)

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