1 (edited by theoldhunterx 14-Feb-2011 08:15:35)

Topic: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Author: [RPA]HunterX

There once was a boy with wild eyes. Behind those pupils was an energetic spirit, akin to flame dancing atop a wick. Never would it falter in its chaotic steps. That is, until an abrupt breath would extinguish his play.

"I hit you! You can't use your arm now it's chopped off!"
The boy and his brother were playing with plastic ninja swords they had won at a "guess your weight, age, or height" circus game months earlier. By now, the cord wraps had been lost and the gold paint on the pommels had been rubbed away. The boy's blade had a sizable dent towards the hilt, causing his sword to bend whenever flailed or struck. Despite the condition of their toys, they found endless fun pretending to be the heroes from video games they so adored.
"You're just saying that you didn't actually hit me." his brother replied mockingly.
"You're lying I hit you in the arm! You always cheat Tony!" the boy yelled
"Stop crying Patrick!"
"I'm not crying and don't call me Patrick or I'll call you Anthony!" whisk. Smack. The boy's hand immediately shot up to his cheek as tears began to surface in his eyes.
"There, now you can cry. You little crybaby." The brother threw down the sword and walked off.
Will there ever be justice?
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    Kiray's eyes lazily slid open from his slumber. Back propped up against a well sized oak, his gaze stretched out across the grassy plains he had been traveling. There was a moderate breeze that swept through the open land, it pushed through tall grass in rolling waves and brought a breath of life to the land. He smiled and closed his eyes again. Leaning his head back against the oak, Kiray yawned and stretched his arms up along the trunk. Upon opening his eyes again, he noticed the sun was beginning to creep out from behind a large cloud encompassing most of the sky.
"That's it, come back to me. No reason to hide, my darling. How I've missed your bright face." He reached his hand up and caressed the suns edge gently with his fingertips. His eyes closed again, as a slight smile slid onto his face. In his thoughts he saw her. The radiant Goddess smiled back at him and waved briefly, before disappearing. "I spose it's that time then." Kiray reached over to his boots and pulled out a slender necklace. Suspended on the chain was a small iron octagon with tiny metal balls at each point. He locked it around his neck before sliding his boots on. Standing up, Kiray dusted his backside off, pulled his robe here and there, added in a few jiggles for comfort, and began walking.
    Hours later as the sun began waning, Kiray noticed a pack of boofas grazing near the horizon. He came upon them unnoticed, though not by stealthy means. Walking up to one, Kiray hands began to trace a simple sigil in the air. As it became completed, the outline came to life. Blue lines of light pulsed momentarily and caught flame. "To Urrem'tier's embrace all things go, may you return." he muttered. When he touched the boofa on the neck, it's muscles relaxed and it slumped down to the ground. The other boofas began moving away, while still unable to sense his presence they felt something amiss. Kiray pulled a carving knife out of his boot and began cutting meat from the fallen boofa. Once finished, he held the meat in one hand and traced a sigil with the other. There were sizzles now as the meat began to cook, small vapors of smoke drifted into the air. He ate quickly, but not rushing. While the town he was headed to was still far away, taking the time to chew thoroughly wouldn't change his arrival in the night.

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    Each step he took through the warren was paved in simmering air. Setting his foot down, overgrown brush, wildflowers, and thigh high grass sank into the dirt, crushed. Picking up his other foot to step forward, the footprint left behind sizzled and the air seemed to steam upwards as if escaping boiling earth below. Where destroyed wildlife rested moments before, the haze brought breath into the greenery, lifting them into their rightful place, untouched. It was small, a simple manipulation. The force dissipated after mending the greenery.
    He could sense them catching up, they weren't far behind now. From comparing their distance between pulses he could tell they were speeding up. (The dogs must have caught my scent by now.) His soft dry voiced echoed shortly in his head, taunting himself as they crept closer. There was only one of them his mind could locate. But this one had Talent and he didn't bother hiding it. Through a few minor weaves, the Gerudo felt how far it could expand, (Not very far.), and in that expansion were four other men on horses accompanied by a hound each. This wasn't the first time the Gerudo had encountered trouble with this tier of nobility. Most times the scenario ended in disaster, but not for him. Continuing his fluid motion, the Gerudo came to a halt, turned around and waited.
    At what he felt was a hundred paces beyond the brush he had just traversed, the beasts began barking. Abruptly the sound of hooves reached him. He withdrew his focus completely, leaving his mind empty. The gallop slowed to a trot as dogs burst through the bushes to surround and circle him. Their saliva dripping teeth shook as growls escaped their throats. He ignored them completely, never meeting their eye.
    The horses stepped into view, bearing five riders total, three dressed in bright orange silk under thickly padded leather armor, they carried bows made from oak that matched their scabbards. The Talanted wore a white cloak, his hood drawn up, over a dull grey robe. The folds in his robe sagged over one another on top his horses saddle, creating a small surface in his lap. His hands focused upon an orb no wider than the length of his palm. Sitting in front, outshining his companions effortlessly, was a man clad in spangling chain from shoulder to toe. A bright crimson cape draped over his shoulders bore a crest over the left breast. The Talented blinked and the dogs ceased their growls. He then spoke.

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Read the first bit, if its fantasy/medieval I approve, this subforum needs more fantasy. Will read rest later

Not many people know this, but I own the first radio in Springfield. Not much on the air then, just Edison reciting the alphabet over and over. "A" he'd say; then "B." "C" would usually follow...

3 (edited by theoldhunterx 16-Feb-2011 09:48:07)

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Dyo woke. Dyo didn't get up. Time passed, long to some, not to Dyo. Metal slid. Light. Dyo didn't get up. A voice spoke from light. Dyo didn't listen. Voice spoke more. Laughter from light, not good laughter. Metal slid and light gone. Dyo sat up. Dyo went inward.
    Time passed. Door open, light rained into the world. Shadow flew from light, thud. Door closed and light gone. Time passed. Rolling over sound, then a yawn. Then a voice, a soft and dry voice.

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

sorry to whoever views this thread, i've been really sick lately, horrible bug going around Columbus. Normally that'd give me more time to write since i've been a shut in / outcast to society (by choice lol), but i haven't felt relaxed enough to let my mind wander. I'll get the next part up soon, I have quite a bit in mind.

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

I am intrigued by your magical land of magical mystery.

Not many people know this, but I own the first radio in Springfield. Not much on the air then, just Edison reciting the alphabet over and over. "A" he'd say; then "B." "C" would usually follow...

6 (edited by theoldhunterx 26-Feb-2011 12:57:56)

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Thank you, Arocalex, believe it or not, you're one of the forces providing motivation for this.
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        While "Trace" was being marched to the Iron Maw, Kiray sat upon a small boulder and enjoyed the sunset. The wind had died down and the plains were solemn. Red-hued golden light bathed the previously emerald grass and the clouds tinted purple around their edges in the darkening, lapis lazuli sky. The site sent shivers of relief down Kirays spine, reminding him of the delicate balance he believed in. He closed his eyes and saw her again, the radiant Goddess. She was laying in a bed, with only her throat and face exposed. A pale skinned God with hair darker than black was slowly pulling the sheet over her body with a tender, obsequious smile. "Sing her to sleep, Irl."
        Abruptly the tranquility was shattered by a loud bang and flash of light. Kiray instinctively rolled backwards off the boulder and moved his hand underneath his cloak. He furthered this display of finesse by landing squarely on his feet, ducking behind the boulder. The world was blurry for Kiray; the bright flash had rubbed the beautiful landscape out of focus and even the weak flare of the sun overpowered his pupils. Despite his stomach climbing up his throat, Kiray kept his calm. As his vision began to return, he could make out a shadowed lump in the middle of a perfect circle of scorched earth. His hand slowly came out from his cloak and he raised himself up over the boulder. He could clearly make out a body.. a child's body.
        "Hey! Are you alive, kid?!" He yelled while running up to the child. The body stirred and Kiray's stomach returned to its rightful spot. The blast had apparently fried the hair off of the child, while leaving skin and cloth untouched.
        "Mister... want.. mmmy..." The child's voice was weak and raspy.
        "I'll help you find your mommy but right now you need attention. I'm going to carry you to a village nearby. Here, drink this." Kiray pulled a satchel out from his cloak, uncorked it, and let a few drops fall onto the childs dry lips. It was at this moment Kiray put together the child was a girl. She almost instantly began to lean up towards the satchel. "Drink slowly, and don't drink too much or you'll feel worse than you do now." She didn't respond, and apparently wasn't listening. Kiray had to pull the satchel back after a few seconds.
         "More.. water."
         "In time, trust me. We need to get going, water won't fix you up as fast as village herbs. What's your name?" But the child had fallen asleep. "Don't do that yet, how am I supposed to give you a piggy back now..." he muttered.
         Nightfall came along with the three moons, the child slept soundly, cradled in Kiray's arms. Even with his heavy, quick pace beating down the tall grass, nothing seemed to stir her. Kiray's mind was racing with unanswered questions. What kind of force was that earlier? He had never seen anything like it from men. Had he witnessed actual divine intervention? Why would they target a child and himself? What possible purpose could there be? "The Gods are. The Gods do. The Gods will." An ancient proverb escaped his muttering lips. As if in response, there were three barks followed by a long howl in the distance. One word jumped into Kiray's head. Coyote. The sound was far, but if they picked up his scent he would encounter them before daybreak. A second howl pierced through the skies, this one much closer. Kiray's pace quickened. "Nobeh must have liked that boofa..."
         "You talk to yourself a lot mister." the child spoke under a daze. Kiray stopped and felt her forehead, she was feverish. "All the Gods must have liked that damn boofa." He sat the child down in the grass and tore off a length of his cloak. After folding it in half twice he drenched the center in water from his satchel and wrapped it around her forehead. Kiray whispered a short incantation and tapped the cloth, turning it cool indefinitely. He then took his cloak off and covered all but her face with it.
         Moonlight outlined his body and gear. A leather belt was double crossed around his waist with his scimitar suspended from a loop. The swords curve was subtle yet definitive. On his right side hung a spatha, longer, broader, and heavier than the scimitar. The spatha would slice off an arm or cleave open a skull as if they were butter. Both blades had separate engravings near their hilts. On the scimitar, an anvil with two hammers crossing each other above, below and wrapped in a banner the words "Deegar Terr Poshly" showed. His spatha was labeled with a scorpion crawling out of a skull's empty eye socket. Above and below his belt he wore simple linen clothing with heavy leather hiking boots. His satchel sat next to a large haversack resting on his back.
         Picking the girl back up he continued his speedy march as the howls of coyotes became closer. It wasn't long before the two came to a familiar hill. Kiray hadn't heard the howls in a while. Two thoughts battled in his head, one dreadful and the other hopeful. Moonlight illuminated the valley around him. The tall grass glowed softly with an eerie light. Every step felt as though he was wading through an endless ocean of mossy-marble colored water. (Just keep swimming.) Another proverb, not from his land though. Upon reaching the crest of the hill, Kiray looked down and saw the village in the distance. His heart jumped with excitement and he let out a sigh of relief. It seemed that the coyotes had been chasing different prey after all. He offered a short prayer to Nobeh and walked patiently towards the village.


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oh my, that took me a lot longer than I expected. Expect some questions to be answered in the next post. But also expect more questions to be raised!

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

"turning it cool indefinitely" Isn't he breaking the laws of thermodynamics?
Maybe it's better to ask if you have thought about how your magic fits in the world.



>Thank you, Arocalex, believe it or not, you're one of the forces providing motivation for this.

Aww shucks, there's usually more then one guy reading but the threshold to post a reply is too big for most.

Not many people know this, but I own the first radio in Springfield. Not much on the air then, just Edison reciting the alphabet over and over. "A" he'd say; then "B." "C" would usually follow...

8 (edited by theoldhunterx 27-Feb-2011 00:31:43)

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there will be in depth explanations soon, little girl will be learning magic ;p

I'm doing my best not to rush the story, which is proving problematic for my limited vocabulary and imagination

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Your pacing is alright, imagination is not something to be rushed and vocabulary is for chumps

Not many people know this, but I own the first radio in Springfield. Not much on the air then, just Edison reciting the alphabet over and over. "A" he'd say; then "B." "C" would usually follow...

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Exam excuses this week, I'll still get something posted before the weekend

Re: Dao of Kiray [Story]

Aww bro, don't make promises you can't keep.

Not many people know this, but I own the first radio in Springfield. Not much on the air then, just Edison reciting the alphabet over and over. "A" he'd say; then "B." "C" would usually follow...