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Topic: Heather's Box

First off, keep in mind that I haven't written anything in years, so this will be a little sketchy at best. And secondly I wrote this because I recently broke up with my fiance of three years, so just be kind please. :-P

Aside from that, commentary is welcome. I've never been much of a poet, so it won't be great, however it says, in so many words, my closure with her. smile

You always feared this day.
Looking through my closet,
You always asked if we were merely a box on this shelf.

Our lives have just begun; but already we are considering escape from this world. Weve waited for so long for this moment to come; were so anxious to be together in Death. So wont you die tonight for love? Baby, Join Me In Death

7. Lemming of Secretive and Surprising Sex

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Re: Heather's Box

[Pre reading]
Ouch, must have hurt sry.  I don't know it seems to be almost common now I know of a number of people in the past year.  Getting it out does help and hey inspiration is inspitation big_smile.


[post read]
Again Ouch.  I'm not sure it seems like both of you kept a part of yourself from the other and you seemed to realise it.  My view is that even though it's painful it's better to end a relationship rather than marrying the wrong person and years later after injuring each other even more ending it.  But yeah, Ouch.  Maybe you write more?

I'm going to be nicer promise

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