Re: Say Something About The Person Above (Part 2)
should watch a game with me, skyro, otto and chwis
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should watch a game with me, skyro, otto and chwis
Screams at television as if people in it can hear? =P
lieses!!
Makes false accusations of lieses!!! ![]()
should take a good look in the mirror ![]()
and should say hi to skyro for me when he sees him
Thinks S.S. is someone who she knows? o.o
by S.S., is referring to either SolidSpecter or SkyroShroud
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by SS refers to Schutzstaffel or Solo Sniper.
Has been playing too much Call of Duty
isn't familiar with the joys of SWAT: Aftermath (oh the joys of teamkilling!)
Likes to surprise his friends from behind.
Fears a beagle on a doghouse
irons his paintball uniform
Is correct ![]()
shocked me with my made up truth ![]()
Runs around her computer screaming "No!" ![]()
I play in woodland camo BDUs with knee and elbow tactical armor
My friends and I make all the folks in tshirts and jeans say "ooh aah"
Too bad we SUCK because they will NOT drill on teamwork ![]()
Plays in woodland camo BDUs with knee and elbow tactical armor
His friends and himself make all the folks in tshirts and jeans say "ooh aah"
Too bad he SUCKS because they will NOT drill on teamwork
made me go
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Hasn't read the poem I wrote in Roleplay forums
has poetry in his soul, that, or real good google skills
made me wonder what is meant by that ^^, that if it's not my own work I googled something which is very hard to find? :s
might have used online rhyming dictionaries when poeting
Yells "great googlymoogly"
yells no longer.
I didn't use any rhyming in my poem cause I didn't want it to rhyme,
rhymes are jolly, my poem isn't,
and as the girl 'feels no more', nor is there any 'feel' in my poem
further analysis of my poem
'The alarm bell rings' first sentence serves aswell as an introduction from the teller, 'listen to my important story', something like that, like you got in old medieval stories, which start with 'let me tell you a tale about' etc as you got in the 'Edda' or 'karel en de Elegast' (just one of the few I know that start somewhat like that) but aswell in the inside story level as the girl is in an urgent period regarding her future and things all being in a mess
The girl has high dreams, but it seems like she won't reach them, and is depressed, and gave up on them, she no longer feels or dreams what she wanted, she became cold. ...
and at the end, it could be seen as a climax, if you take the 'Wrong is a fact" as meaning, 'but the following things(facts) are wrong and transforming them to : "Angels haven't died nor light has faded, and there is no falling, falling is an illusion.
also I personally made this possible link with 'drug usage' on her 'feels no more and blur-inked mind' whilst writing it.
and the capitals in the first stanza are to strenghthen the opposite words, to show some sort of struggle, between her wanting to LAUGH, see the STARS, to FEEL, and to RING (ringelinging is a jolly word)
I also like the way how I created this story, on a 'performance' level, intiutively.
perhaps a bit weird, I dunno, but my inspiration truelly came from 'Stairway to Heaven' for writting this poem.
I just took stairway to heaven apart, reversed it on a semantic level, transformed it, gathered together all I had, mixed the order and made something sensefull out of it, which coincidently also meets along with my RL status quo, having failed for my exams first year firs semester at uni aswell, and atm aswell not doing good for the next exam this semester, wondering where my feature will lead me, so my own emotions are in it aswell.
also interpretations can be addapted differently I think, anyone have any sugestions on that perhaps (true no nonsense real (and/or personal) interpretations?
should start a separate thread.. ![]()
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