Re: Grammar and Spelling Hunters, Unite!
actually you can build more than 8, but thats another debate
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actually you can build more than 8, but thats another debate
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nah you're all wrong ... gc is gold cookies!! ![]()
Military Advisor
"I'm afraid our production unit only have the capacity to produce 8 exploration ships during a period of 24 weeks. Right now you have the free capacity to build 8 exploration ships."
TO:
Military Advisor
"I'm afraid our production unit only has the capacity to produce 8 exploration ships during a period of 24 weeks. Right now you have the free capacity to build 6 exploration ships."
OR:
Military Advisor
"I'm afraid our production units only have the capacity to produce 8 exploration ships during a period of 24 weeks. Right now you have the free capacity to build 6 exploration ships."
Military Advisor
" We did not have enough cash to pay the salaries and upkeep cost to the army last week; some of our troops have deserted!"
TO:
Military Advisor
" We did not have enough cash to pay the salaries and upkeep cost of the army last week; some of our troops have deserted!"
Political Advisor
"Use the hot list to keep track of the empires important to you, be it friends or enemies. Our intelligence can keep track of up to 20 other empires.
TO:
"Use the hot list to keep track of the empires that are important to you, whether they are friends or enemies. Our intelligence can keep track of up to 20 other empires.
Note: "Online" only means the empire in question has logged on within the last two hours. If you forget logging out when leaving the game, you will remain marked as Online for up to two hours.
TO:
Note: "Online" only means that the empire in question has logged on within the last two hours. If you forget to log out when leaving the game, you will remain marked as "Online" for up to two hours.
Political Advisor
"Here you can change important empire settings, as well as surrender and enter vacation mode."
TO:
Political Advisor
"Here you can change important empire settings, as well as surrender or enter vacation mode."
"You have commited offensive actions in the last 24 hours, you are not allowed to delete."
TO:
"You have committed offensive actions within the last 24 hours; you are not allowed to delete. "
FA Week XX, X XXX made an attack against planet X in the XX,XX system owned by XXXXXX (XXXX), but the planet's defense was to strong.
TO:
FA Week XX, X XXX made an attack against planet X in the XX,XX system owned by XXXXXX (XXXX), but the planet's defense was too strong.
Week XX,XX Attempt to raise force field
We found indications that enemy wizards tried to set up a force field around or portal on planet: XX at x:XX, y:XX. The magic seems to origin from XXXXXXX
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Week XX,XX Attempt to raise force field
We have found indications that enemy wizards tried to set up a force field around our portal on planet: XX at x:XX, y:XX. The magic seems to originate from XXXXXXX
Week XX, XX Force field against portal
We have indications that a force field is building up around our portal on planet X at x:XX, y:XX. We esitmate that the force field will be strong enough to prevent us to use the portal in less in 12 weeks. We are not sure how long the forcefield will maintain the strength to stop us, but you better prepare to defend the planet without the benefits of a portal for at least 10 weeks.
TO:
Week XX, XX Force field against portal
We have indications that a force field is building up around our portal on planet X at x:XX, y:XX. We estimate that the force field will be strong enough to prevent us from using the portal in less in 12 weeks. We are not sure how long the forcefield will maintain the strength to stop us, but you had better prepare to defend the planet without the benefits of a portal for at least 10 weeks.
> SSL wrote:
> FA Week XX, X XXX made an attack against planet X in the XX,XX system owned by XXXXXX (XXXX), but the planet's defense was to strong.
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FA Week XX, X XXX made an attack against planet X in the XX,XX system owned by XXXXXX (XXXX), but the planet's defense was too strong.
Shouldn't it in fact be...
FA Week XX, X XXX made an attack against planet X in the XX,XX system owned by XXXXXX (XXXX), but *the defense(s) of(/on?) the planet was(/were)* too strong.
As "planet" is not a person nor a name.
Either.
Depends on if you see the planet as possessing the defenses, hence it's defense, or if the defenses are just hanging out like groupies. ![]()
Possession entails ownership or attributes of a noun, e.g. "The dog has fleas. We have to get rid of the dog's fleas."
Similarly, "The dog has fleas. We have to remove the fleas off of the dog."
http://www.imperialconflict.com/forum/viewforum.php?id=6238
Remove the first "u" ![]()
thats the English (UK) spelling. US spells it wrong as far as I'm concerned. Just like color.
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Hall of Fame page (history.php)
Couple of typos on the right hand column when you click a galaxy
"Playery" should be "Player"
"round ended at ...(date)" should be "round ended on ...(date)"
Rankings page (rankings.php)
"Score is what determines the winner. It is added to on every tick."
Not so much a typo but factually incorrect
I don't think anyone judges the winner by Score. Perhaps change it with something like "Score is a measure of points awarded to families each tick depending on their networth as well as size rank for that tick."
Phew!
Thanks everybody, most of these changes should be live now. Feel free to double check.
There were a few that I didn't make because to me what is currently there is also technically valid. If you see any changes you requested that are still "broken", this may be why. Or maybe I just missed your change. Point it out and I'll check. =P
Some fun trivia:
The revision number in the code that brought these changes live is r85.
45 different files were affected.
Forever got the most tag points in one post with 63.
Great job, everybody!
[13:50:00] <Gwynedd> here is a syntax error
[13:50:01] <Gwynedd> The round has not yet started. While you can navigate through the game, no offensive actions can be taken.
[13:50:07] <Gwynedd> the round has not started yet*
[13:50:09] <I_like_pie> where is that from?
[13:50:21] <Gwynedd> the home page before the galaxy starts
[13:50:22] <Gwynedd> ![]()
[13:52:11] <Gwynedd> affairs of state:
[13:52:12] <Gwynedd> Last Week's Affairs
[13:52:18] <Gwynedd> should be Weeks
[13:52:45] <I_like_pie> oh are these typos or new errors?
[13:53:57] <Gwynedd> typos now that im looking
[13:54:33] <I_like_pie> ah
[13:56:27] <Gwynedd> Fleet page
[13:56:29] <Gwynedd> Military Advisor
[13:56:29] <Gwynedd> "We have no fleets on the move currently. My staff is itching for action, scratch scratch."
[13:56:32] <Gwynedd> syntax
[13:56:45] <I_like_pie> add em to the thread =P
[13:56:56] <Gwynedd> should b We have no fleets currently on the move. My staff are itching for action; scratch scratch.
Edit --->
That last one could just be Stefan saying he is suffering from VD, with an itchy staff....
To be consistent with the above:
Military Advisor
"We have not stationed any forces."
should read fleets rather than forces.
"Some fun trivia:"
Shameless plug: #kod
"Don't complain about 5 seconds to answer! No drunks or "googlers" [sic].
"
Your agent network allows you to send out agents to disrupt *the enemies activities. An agent action would currently cost us 74 cash.
Should be *your
Reason, to fit in with the wizards speel:
Wizards can use their mental abilites to affect your enemy or your own empire. A magic action would currently cost us 1.8 octarine.
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