Ill post his email

Instead of writing about aliens, write about Catholics. You won't need to change the plot, just the geography. So a story about Mondo the Martian trying to conquer earth from a secret vault under Olympus Mons becomes a story of Cardinal Mark conquering earth from a secret vault under the Vatican.

Put in a lot of puzzles. This shows how really devious your Catholics are. In real life bad guys prep teens to blow themselves up in movie theaters without making a Soduku out of it, but nobody wants to read that crap.

Your characters should spend a lot of time running around between puzzles talking about how confused they are and wondering what Catholic lied to them and about what. The best ending is that every Catholic lies about everything. This will fill chapters of your story and make the heroes more likeable to your readers, who will feel better about being totally confused and disliking Catholics.

It helps to explain why the heroes are up to their eyeballs in a secret world of Catholic conspiracy, if the Catholics hired them to get some answers.

Your heroes, despite working for celibates, or maybe because of it, must get laid.

In real life, the bad guy dies in a shootout without a lenghty debate over the inevitable failure of his conspiracy in the face of sex and drugs and rock and roll, but again nobody wants to read that crap.

If you do that, and you're a crap writer, you're the next Dan Brown.

If you do that, and you're a good writer, you're the next Umberto Eco.

Either way--Kaching!

Impressive, aluminum melts at 3000F

Pigeons are wily

Kewl

We should have finished them though

Knows its an avatar and has already complained about it

I quit on Level 3.

Should know I said you were correct about what A10 said not that A10 was right

Should know I oppose gay marriage for couples but support it for trios and quintets

> NathanLee wrote:

*we've won this battle but the war has not yet begun*

then the whole film was a f'ing waste of time.<

LOL

That says they regulate commerce not engage in it

But I'm sure the 9th amendment taken with the 4th and the 14th and what the hell bring the 5th along too all means Congress can make crying children smile and chase away the boogeyman. And if you don't agree, Obama won't stand with you. He'll be with the cool people.

http://michaelscomments.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/the-may-unemployment-numbers-are-here-and-worse-than-predicted/

In January Obama TOLD us what he saw coming...if we didn't do his Stimulus package, and what we could expect if we did.

Well we did it...

and $800 Billion later we're WORSE OFF

shouldnt this finish Gordon Brown?